Hi Poppy- I enjoyed reading through your evaluation. There are a few things in there for writing that I hope you can use to form your goals for term 3. As you highlighted, I agree word choice is something to work on. For example "...our economy has one of the biggest bangs..." Did you mean biggest hits? there are a few other examples like this you may like to find. Its a common error, I still make sometimes in my writing. Keep working at it!
Hi Poppy- I enjoyed reading through your evaluation. There are a few things in there for writing that I hope you can use to form your goals for term 3. As you highlighted, I agree word choice is something to work on. For example "...our economy has one of the biggest bangs..." Did you mean biggest hits? there are a few other examples like this you may like to find. Its a common error, I still make sometimes in my writing. Keep working at it!
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