You have included lots of detail in your paragraphs this week Poppy. All of your ideas are related to the main idea, which is perfect. Just make sure you have added the little words needed to tie all the ideas together into sentences (See Slide 7/Detail 2)
You have included lots of detail in your paragraphs this week Poppy. All of your ideas are related to the main idea, which is perfect. Just make sure you have added the little words needed to tie all the ideas together into sentences (See Slide 7/Detail 2)
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