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Monday, June 24, 2019

MATARIKI POEMS

                                                       Matariki Poems


WALT: for Matariki week, room 4 had to write jaciwa poems about Matariki.

                           
                                Matariki
                                star constellations
                                Bright and wonderful
                                Moving across the sky
                                Dancing in the clouds
                                Celebrations with all
                                Shining down
                                Beautiful

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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 25, 2019 at 11:37 AM

    I like how you made it all around the same topic and it all makes sense.
    Next time you could put in a full stopat the end from Pyper

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  2. AnonymousJune 27, 2019 at 11:15 AM

    Hello, I enjoyed the few describing words you put in and the relationship you chose. You could work on you spelling for your WALT *Jakiwa*, overall it was enjoyable and simple.

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  3. AnonymousAugust 26, 2019 at 2:23 PM

    I like the poem very interisting and a good use of wordxs that realate to the subject. Maybe next time work on your spelling.

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